Advice To Your Child

Rating: 3.9
Advice to who?
Advice for you!
Heed the words I say,
for if you do my dear little one
you'll be mighty okay.

Advice to who?
Advice for you!
Don't grow up too fast,
for if you you do it will lead to many
things you'll miss in your past.

Advice to who?
Advice for you!
Now all I have left to say,
do your best and try your hardest,
I'll still love you either way.
Saturday, February 27, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: advice,child,life,love,motherhood,parenthood
Jane Campion 22 July 2019
Advice to whom I presume.
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Allotey Abossey 20 May 2015
Growth comes with responsibilities and there's no need to rush to grow, well taken mum.. God bless you..
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Paul Sebastian 09 October 2014
Great. Keep it up. This poem on advice rhymes well.
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Khairul Ahsan 01 December 2013
do your best and try your hardest, I'll still love you either way.
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Sandra Feldman 30 June 2013
Very, tender, motherly, good, loving advice, NICE. Mothers are never wrong, governments are
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Angela Sorenson 20 March 2010
It is a nice poem.i like how it rhymes.
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Julio Hernandez 27 February 2010
Nice poem, im pretty much still a child so i understand what you mean, i did rush things and i do miss my past, and your poem riminded me of that so thank you, even if its not much- in my opinion i think this poem deserves a 10 out of 10
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Angela Sorenson 27 February 2010
It can be good to recieve advice especially if it is good advice and if it is possible.Take care.
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Zack Burton 27 February 2010
It's good. I like the stylistic details particularly. But it seems like the kind of thing I see a lot of. It's a bit generic.6 stars anyhow.
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