Thursday, October 22, 2009

Aids Orphans Comments

Rating: 5.0
Should the young children
Suffer for our sin,
Does it not grip your trembling
Heart within,


Alf Hutchison
Reshma Ramesh 03 November 2009
great poem with a great message..........may god bless them!
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Ken E Hall 30 October 2009
Kind of you to bring the attention this awful plight so big in its scope and so so sad....... actions must happen words fall on deaf ears Thanks for the read regards Been away from the computer for a week on hols.
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Almedia Knight-Oliver 28 October 2009
Hi Alf. another poem that points to the failures of mankind. My heart bleeds for all humanity because there's not enough love for the underprivileged and poor of the world.We just have to love all humanity and we will not have all the problems we're having now. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem. a 10++++>>>>>.
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Sandra Martyres 28 October 2009
A heart rending piece Alf, you are right to draw the attention of people to the sad fate of these unfortunate children...10
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Louis Rams 27 October 2009
again we are on the same page. i wrote one called the 'orphanage' which i had posted last week. excellent! thank you for sharing this with all of us. another triple ten
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Janell Cressman 27 October 2009
wow, they need to have some help, really good eye opening poem! ! ! !
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Emu Getachew 27 October 2009
When we fail to listen, we fail to learn pain, when we fail to touch, we fail to learn how to feel, and when we fail to care we fail to be human. Thanks for reminding me to think outside “I”.
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Meggie Gultiano 26 October 2009
We do have our share of helping out and reaching the needs of the orphans here every week end, and it's a joy to share our time, talent and even a little amount of our blessings to them.What a nice world we could have been if we only have eyes, ears and heart for them. Your piece has a good, powerful message to be heard loud and clear. thanks for sharing your wisdom with us, Alf...This is a wonderful piece.
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Catrina Heart 26 October 2009
You brought out a sad pace of reality.....devastating to know yet you have crafted it well...Thanks!
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Tia Maria 26 October 2009
Your compassion comes to mind after reading this and God's word... 'Suffer the little children to come unto me...' Bless you & well done for writing of this heartwrenching situation with such clarity... we must do whatever we are able to do to care for our children
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Rakesh Bedi 26 October 2009
a sad poem; bound to hit the reader below the belt...especially, the conclusion....
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Kerry O'Connor 25 October 2009
'a highway ten feet wide..' That's a line to grip the heart, Alf. Thank you for writing this poem and putting it out there to raise awareness.
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Lady Grace 25 October 2009
orphans need shelter.foods, education and other words, they need the COMPLETE LOVE.COMPLETE CARE AND COMPLETE ATTENTION from all of us....nice piece...
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Alf Hutchison 24 October 2009
Thanks Alf, I will do so. Have just returned from a three day trip to rural clinics with 2 colleagues. Aids is rife, so I shall be reading your write with interest. Regards Cindy
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Alf Hutchison 24 October 2009
well written poem best regards Mari
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Marieta Maglas 24 October 2009
wonderful sad realistic poem about orphans, very well written, thank you for sharing...10+++
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Eyan Desir 24 October 2009
Well written but life isn't fair remember that ok
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Shashendra Amalshan 23 October 2009
Very Powerful poem indeed.It is a great plight that not only the sinner but also the people around him have to suffer for his or her evil deeds. That is a great plight indeed. Thanks for writing this poem. Your pen can be used as a humane weapon to tackle evil that rules the modern world. But I always believe that words alone do not put an end to such plagues. We have to put those words in to action! ! I mean these days politicians do make grand eloquent speeches, yet they never really put those words in to action. Therefore not only we have to write and ask questions, but also time is ripe to be united and counter these evil, so that the future of the human kind will be blessed with a world with out demons.. This is a great write..10++ Cheers Shan
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Sonya Florentino 23 October 2009
a very powerful moving heart-felt poem Alf... the last stanza is an imagined but realistic scenario that cannot fail to move anyone's heart....
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Winnie Angel 23 October 2009
Cruel reasoning is everywhere, it has become a way of our lives, penetrating too deeply..but hope is always there- if and if only we work together to elecate poverty and usher in a new era of peace, health and equality to some extent if not completely! ..Winnie
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