Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 106,431 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Akhtar Is Trying To Become Sobers - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My friends I have created a bad image of me,
You remain unhappy with me, how can I see,
I had been starring at the girls too bold,
That’s indecent on the part of an old,
Now I shall close one when a bold I see.

Topic(s) of this poem: sobriety


Comments about Akhtar Is Trying To Become Sobers by Akhtar Jawad

  • Hazel Durham (9/10/2015 9:14:00 AM)


    A cracking write, so funny and a great ending! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/9/2015 8:57:00 AM)


    How will we get those wonderful love poems you staying sober? No! Not a good idea for you! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/9/2015 12:34:00 AM)


    ha ha! an amusing poem.. lovely.. enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/9/2015 12:33:00 AM)


    I feel you have a child's heart! But I doubt if you can remain sober for long! Your mischievous nature will show itself up one day or the other! (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/8/2015 2:50:00 PM)


    Very fanstatic and funny. Amusing one. Thanks for sharing. ......10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/8/2015 7:31:00 AM)


    Off course in the first step it's an achievement
    .
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 8, 2015



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