Bill Mitton

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Albert Potter Is Not Dead! - Poem by Bill Mitton

Albert Potter isn't dead
It were just a bloody lie
In fact, apart from athlete's foot
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  • Ernestine Northover (1/13/2006 4:02:00 PM)

    I'm clapping my hands Bill. what a fun poem, and again a lovely character to go in it. This is going to my Favourites. Love Ernestine XXX (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2006 3:48:00 PM)

    Pure comedy, Bill. But I'd enjoy it even more if lines 5-9 followed the rhyme scheme used in the othe parts of the poem. Tweak it, will you? (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2006 3:03:00 PM)

    very clever, humorous and well written
    Rusty
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