All I Need

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I'm not asking you to meet everyday
I could try & bare
When you are away
All I need is just some care

All I need is not to feel so much alone
All I need is a tender heart not hard as stone
All I need is to hear your voice on the phone

All I need is to know that you're fine
All I need is to know that you're mine
All I need is to know that I'm in your heart
Even If we are going to stay for so long apart

I'm not asking you to count every dropp of water in the rain!
All I need is to stop making me feel this pain
I'm not asking you to count every particle of sand on the shore!
All I need is to know that you Love me from your very inner core
All I need is to know that I'm the only one that you adore

I'm not asking you to make the birds swim and make the fish fly!
All I need is not to hear the word 'Goodbye '
I'm not asking you to climb a mountain so high!
Nor am I asking you to swim across the deepest sea!
All I need is to show me that you love me

I'm not asking you to walk a thousand mile!
All I need is a simple smile
I'm not asking you to make the trees blue!
All I need is to know that you're true

I'm not asking you for a diamond ring!
All I need is a much humble thing
All I need is your attention
All I need is affection

I'm not asking you for a princess dress!
All I need is something... much much less
All I need is a gentle caress

I'm not asking you for a castle of gold!
I'm not asking you for more than you could afford!
All I need is not to feel ignored
All I need is not to feel that you're bored
All I need is a kind word

I'm not asking you to make the year 14 months!
Nor am I asking you to make the week 8 days!
I'm not asking you to make the sun rise from the west!
All I need is to sleep on your chest
To hear your heart beat
All I need is to feel complete

AM I ASKING TOO MUCH? ? !

January 2002
Thursday, June 8, 2006
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COMMENTS
Anthony Roberts 26 February 2019
This is a rip off of my poem! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Raaheem 14 November 2017
I liked it very much, I know there is no one to care for me But I know you are there for me
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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2014
All I need is to show me that you love me The essence of all your needs is concentrated in the above line and that's your right which should be given to you. You have beautifully described it.
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Malini Kadir 24 January 2013
you share my heart............it looks like.......
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Shubham Koul 17 May 2012
i like it......this is beautiful creation but too lengthy...there was less continuity....but over all composition was good....
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Dead Leaf 09 May 2012
A beautiful poem.....i like it
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Ken E Hall 04 February 2010
All you need is his love to make you feel complete..just what everybody needs and your style is nice to read...maybe its a lesson for the boys+++10 regards
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Muhammed Medhat 23 November 2009
miss anonymous..your lingual skills are beyond speech BUT..i really have a small crticism; your point was clear from the begining of the poem and yet you kept explaining it in detail without switching to the next point..what we say in arabic: '5air al kalam ma kal wa dal'
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Merna Ibrahim 07 November 2009
I agree with Omar that you are not asking too much! ! ......this is a great poem with a new and brilliant idea....you are talented...keep it up :) 10sss
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Omar Ibrahim 22 July 2009
no you'r not asking too much........ :) great one written by a great poetess! ! keep writing!
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