All Right You Win Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

All Right You Win

Rating: 5.0


So you want me to write a poem.
Why?
Oh, so you can get into my mind,
Know my inner most thoughts and
Trample around inside my head.
Go write your own poem...
I'm busy weaving halos for those imps
Of hollow dreams.
This is a poem you say...
I had hoped you wouldn't notice.


October 7,2009
7: 50 p.m.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 08 October 2009

A new twist. Amusing. I like your sense of irony. I am wondering just what inspired you to write this poem. I can feel the burst of emotion.

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Iris Washington 08 October 2009

Mrs. Holmes, I love this Poem.

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James Mclain 07 October 2009

We cannot help.. but notice.. how you dance.. around.. inside our heads.. like dreams...iip

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