Saturday, August 20, 2011

Allow Me To Introduce Myself Comments

Rating: 4.7
I hate to talk about self
Why would I want to talk about self?
But been black and educated in my community
That makes me at the same time both…


David Beckham
Amy Lalala 01 September 2011
I love this! i wondered why you weren't posting new poems but you were obviously working on a couple good ones!
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Allemagne Roßmann 25 August 2011
Nice imageries and explanations well articulated.I love this format of yours..Amazing write and i like the undercurrent of logic here...well penned..
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Smoky Hoss 23 August 2011
Very well said, good words! ! !
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Wang Qian 22 August 2011
very nicely written, showing the hidden pain and struggle inside. Softly created but shows powerful meaning, Every cell of the poem is just like a piece of bleeding feather on a wing stretching so widely and desirably to the 'complete freedom'.
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Ragesh Damodaran 21 August 2011
I find the following themes in the poem - social perception, social prejudice, the immoral desire to make it without values. David, you have brought out these themes some in an original way, but I missed the central theme of the poem which is suggested by the title.
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Subodh Pandey 20 August 2011
A nice write.i liked your opening.i think that two sides are not very much distinct but are amalgamated in a way that two can not be separated how much one tries.
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Stefanie Fontker 20 August 2011
Everyone has their own prejudices, it is sad, but true. All we can do is try to practice being non-judgemental, and get to know people beneath their most out-loud traits. Great poem, very interesting.
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Eric Cockrell 20 August 2011
a very well written poem... all too often we allow ourselves to be bound by other people's shallow conceptions of what we are... whether they judge us by color, by appearance, by sexual orientation, or by beliefs... only we can set ourselves free... by delving deep into our innermost selves, and then giving what we find to the world unconditionally.... i can tell you have deep sense of character, and deep convictions... i salute you on your journey. keep writing and sharing your gift.
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