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Friday, December 5, 2008

Almost 13

Rating: 4.4
What's really going on.
TV. for hours - THERE GONE!
Homework maybe and radio on.
Let me fill this pot bowl.
Stereo loud - rock song on.
Beer, tobacco - night stand.
Strobe light with color on.
My life is getting funny.
Now all the house lights on.
The couch - my favorite pillow.
What is happening to me?
Crazy thoughts that just won't flee.
Into the bathroom - head down.
Tears running over the deep frown.
Into the mirror I look.
A JUNKY WHORE - PLUS A CROOK.
The blood is dripping now.
They don't love me - another down.
On the floor with one knee.
Dead I am in this red sea.

from my book - DREAMS 2
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Jennifer K 11 July 2010
really nice. i think that some of teh images a bit overboard, but your point is definitely recieved. nice.
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Decay and degeneration In vivid expression Sorry listeners are rare For postulation Will stay as aesthetic intuition! Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK PS Incidentally I voted after 12 lolol n
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David Sabo 21 December 2009
dude you killed it. that was awesome, I was laughing and crying.
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 December 2009
a deep write. marks 10 shan
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James Nall 24 September 2009
TAKING THE WORDS FROM MY BRAIN, JOE! I WRITE A LOT OF DEPRESSED STUFF AND LOOKING AT THE DATES NEXT TO MY POEMS TELL YOU HOW I FEEL AT THAT TIME. GOOD WRITE MY FRIEND!
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Last hakkaobake 01 September 2009
this is really good so keep it up oh wait I still have like 7 pages to go.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 August 2009
What is happening to me? Crazy thoughts that just won't flee. Into the bathroom - head down. Tears running over the deep frown. is it not reminding of what u actually are... beautiful poem with clear thoughts and self introspection too...10 read mine friend in mirror...what is secret..do anything u like
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a lovely write..the depression caused because of the void in themselves..they seem loud and fearless..yet they miss something
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Kesav Easwaran 19 April 2009
you bring out the decay in today's fast modern life and its deadly aftermaths in your powerful write, Joe...10
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 April 2009
I second the thoughts of palas..................Good Write.........
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