shubham kumar

Alone On Sea - Poem by shubham kumar

Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
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it's taken from poem hunter

Comments about Alone On Sea by shubham kumar

  • (4/28/2014 9:23:00 AM)

    dude hHhHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (Report) Reply

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  • Subhakanta Sahu (3/26/2014 1:26:00 PM)

    The world is too vast yaar, don't feel alone. We are with you.
    I love your poem Alone on sea
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  • (10/11/2013 3:03:00 PM)

    I like it. It talks about being alone and then at the end it has a neat twist to it :) (Report) Reply

  • Isabella Velazco (9/17/2013 6:54:00 PM)

    that poem did not make sense i'm sorry but it did not make any type of sense try to make more sense on the list of poems alright so try to make another poem making sense and try to make more rhyming than you did right now because you did a horrible job doing that type of rhyming if you say that type of poem aloud on the stage they going to kick you out of the sage or the contest (Report) Reply

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