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Aloof From Life

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On the bank of the river Shitalaksha
I was sitting with my childhood friend
After long gap, we could find some time to sit together
All old memories were coming up one by one
The water was flowing through the river at an intense speed
The sound from the curving water was creating a pleasant music
We kept our cell phone switched off to escape family and foe
Big and small boats were passing through
It all seemed like a beautiful large ever changing canvass
Where the painter was painting beautiful pictures

The blowing lights from the passing ships
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eloida Capuno 11 October 2011

i am not into critiquing some one else's work, i feel we should all be free to express what we want unlimited by what others might say. I will read your poems no matter how it is badly written or exceptional. this one is good.

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