America Poem by Keilani Poetry

America

Rating: 5.0


Turmoil
a raging sea
capsizing our democracy

or

washing anew
our sacred prophecy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 08 January 2023

Call me an idealist, but I believe that my Great Neighbour will rebound and become great again. (No, I'm not a Trump supporter) . With God's help, America will vote in another Kennedy-like president. And this one won't be assassinated! Great poem!

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Keilani Poetry 10 January 2023

Continuation of my comment - "with God's help" - herein lies the key. I believe that is exactly the way that the U.S. will make it. Thanks very much for your kind words.

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Keilani Poetry 10 January 2023

Your optimism is appreciated. With God's help

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Such tests, democracy can and shall withstand. Good poem!

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Keilani Poetry 08 January 2023

I hope you are right, Unnikrishnan. Thank you

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Sandra Feldman 08 January 2023

Excellently written Truth!

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Keilani Poetry 08 January 2023

Thank you Sandra. We pray for the flourishing of democracy, though our worries are well founded.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 08 January 2023

Hope the Sea does a good job in either case. Nice write

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Keilani Poetry 08 January 2023

The USA is in great turmoil and I thank you for your words of hope and kindness.

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Sandra Feldman 08 January 2023

Our present crossroads and definition as a Country, brilliantly presented. I am inclined to believe that the moment is not our very best.Seems that patriotism and care have stayed home.

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