Friday, September 25, 2009

An Epitaph Comments

Rating: 5.0
On a sultry day, walking on the roadside,
Someone gently tapped on my backside.
Turned, saw my best friend, with a broad smile.
Oh, where had you been all this while?

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Mamta Agarwal
COMMENTS
Leela Devi 28 December 2010
glad to go through your precious piece/hope to read more
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Very unique my friend.
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bye bye... bye bye 19 October 2009
When we┬┤ve forgotten how to laugh, it is time to retreat and reflect our situation. Very good!
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premji premji 08 October 2009
dear mamtaji, we are all living tombs..... where to run away and lead a peaceful life?
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Vidi Writes 04 October 2009
A true story of one and all of us How many of us... How many times... Would have written our own... Epitaph 'Brief literary piece commemorating... A dead piece of life' But we are all like that of - Phoenix Lifes.. great gift.... To rise renewed from the ashes. NOW AND AGAIN.
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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009
wonderful narrative poem, thank you for sharing.....10
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Sandra Martyres 25 September 2009
The last stanza is brilliant Mamta....you give the reader real food for thought...10+++
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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 September 2009
R E F L E C T I V E! ! ! ---> ...............AMMMmmmmmazing rhyme and rhythm! ..........................beautiful signfiers catched the signifieds .....................................touched the reader the glowing wording! ..................................................ALLTOGETHERWOWWOWWOW! 10000000+
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 September 2009
the concluding lines says a lot mam...a lovely casual poem...10
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Saadat Tahir 25 September 2009
masterful.... mamta ji u pick up the mundane...views out a whizzing train....embelish with hina...gota kinaree(URDU) and make em special beyond recognotion very well written pleased and wiser... cheers and ten
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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009
She took a long breath and said, must admit Was losing my sense of humour, bit by bit. Would you believe, had written my own epitaph: 'Here lies one, who sought to make the world laugh.' --------- Great beautiful composition dear.................rhymes and rhythm well placed....10/10
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Rakesh Bedi 25 September 2009
The concluding lines, mamta, give new dimensions to your poem and add an unmeasurable value to it.....thanks for sharing.....
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