Mamta Agarwal

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An Epitaph - Poem by Mamta Agarwal

On a sultry day, walking on the roadside,
Someone gently tapped on my backside.
Turned, saw my best friend, with a broad smile.
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  • (12/28/2010 8:54:00 AM)

    glad to go through your precious piece/hope to read more (Report)Reply

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (3/12/2010 2:53:00 PM)

    Very unique my friend. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/19/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    When we´ve forgotten how to laugh, it is time to retreat and reflect our situation. Very good! (Report)Reply

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  • premji premji (10/8/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    dear mamtaji,
    we are all living tombs.....
    where to run away and lead a peaceful life?
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  • Vidi Writes (10/4/2009 2:19:00 AM)

    A true story of one and all of us
    How many of us...
    How many times...
    Would have written our own... Epitaph

    'Brief literary piece commemorating...
    A dead piece of life'
    But we are all like that of - Phoenix
    Lifes.. great gift....
    To rise renewed from the ashes.
    NOW AND AGAIN.
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  • (9/26/2009 3:35:00 PM)

    wonderful narrative poem, thank you for sharing.....10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Martyres (9/25/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    The last stanza is brilliant Mamta....you give the reader real food for thought...10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/25/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    R E F L E C T I V E! ! ! --->
    ...............AMMMmmmmmazing rhyme and rhythm!
    ..........................beautiful signfiers catched the signifieds
    .....................................touched the reader the glowing wording!
    ..................................................ALLTOGETHERWOWWOWWOW!

    10000000+
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  • (9/25/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    the concluding lines says a lot mam...a lovely casual poem...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (9/25/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    masterful.... mamta ji u pick up the mundane...views out a whizzing train....embelish with hina...gota kinaree(URDU) and make em special beyond recognotion
    very well written

    pleased and wiser...
    cheers and ten
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  • (9/25/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    She took a long breath and said, must admit
    Was losing my sense of humour, bit by bit.
    Would you believe, had written my own epitaph:
    'Here lies one, who sought to make the world laugh.'
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    Great beautiful composition dear.................rhymes and rhythm well placed....10/10
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  • (9/25/2009 5:32:00 AM)

    The concluding lines, mamta, give new dimensions to your poem and add an unmeasurable value to it.....thanks for sharing..... (Report)Reply

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