C.J. Heck

Rookie - 258 Points (August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida)

An Innocent Voyeur - Poem by C.J. Heck

An old man glances through a window
to one in the building below.
Through slats awry in seduction's haste,
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Comments about An Innocent Voyeur by C.J. Heck

  • (12/6/2005 3:32:00 AM)

    How sad! Poor old guy all worked up and he didn't even get any action! lol

    Well done. I like!

    S
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  • (3/14/2005 6:10:00 PM)

    Very nice work on an old subject, typical c.j heck poem no stone left unturned
    a true poets account of an event

    warm regards AJS
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  • (3/14/2005 5:33:00 PM)

    Sensitively handled, you left all players with the dignity of their humanity (Report)Reply

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  • (3/14/2005 4:33:00 PM)

    Nice one, CJ.
    It has prompted a response from this old man - in print, that is!
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  • (3/14/2005 4:27:00 PM)

    A beautifully written and atmospheric poem. Excellent indeed.
    Chrissie
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  • (3/14/2005 3:24:00 PM)

    Just the perfect temperature, C J...just right...I see you did not 'procrastinate' too long...thank you for sharing...very well done...

    Lare
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  • (3/14/2005 12:56:00 PM)

    CJ,

    I do like the way you give room for the reader to determine their own level of sensual feelings. Softly teasing as always.

    Rusty
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  • (3/14/2005 12:42:00 PM)

    Very powerful and vivid C.J. Nice work (Report)Reply

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