Bharath konduru

Rookie - 280 Points (21 9 1994 / hydrebad)

An Orphan's Dream - Poem by Bharath konduru

I lose my parent's
i am an orphan now.
I mean, i don't know
mother and father's love.

In my life
from mine know age,
i am living
in the orphanage.

Orphan are
friend's of mine,
with whom
i am very fine.

like wise in my life

on a fine day
i have a dream,
in which my life
have a new theme.

I am playing with
mother and father.
About me, they are the people
who will bother.

All the
happy night's,
we used to have
pillow fight's.

Every day
they take me to play garden.
Every morning
i go to kinder-garden.

In the dream,

i have a sleep
when a bed time story is finished.
Suddenly when my eye's are opened
i see my dream is vanished.

Then i remember that,

i lose my parent's
i am an orphan now.
In a dream i have
mother and father's love.

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams

Comments about An Orphan's Dream by Bharath konduru

  • (7/22/2017 2:33:00 PM)

    A great poem with touch of pathos, great to read. (Report) Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (7/22/2017 11:56:00 AM)

    Heart touching poem. Parents love is most valuable in life and orphans are deprived of that. Very nicely done. Feel the pain of a child with no parents. (Report) Reply

  • Denis Mair (7/22/2017 11:05:00 AM)

    Very moving. The need for parents is so strong that you find it in dreams. It makes me remember how I felt like an orphan sometimes after my parents divorce. And when we are cut off from our divine origins, caught in a trap of suffering, we may feel like orphans. It is good that you also find warm human ties in the orphanage. (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2017 10:50:00 AM)

    Very poignant and o so true wondering why..good poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/22/2017 5:26:00 AM)

    This is nice to see your poem as the poem of the day. Congratulations! This is nice to revisit this poem on this day. Earlier I have already read this poem and commented....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (7/22/2017 4:10:00 AM)

    The words are powered by the emotions of an orphaned boy. His marginal status in the society and the plight has been nicely portrayed. Very sincere and poignant. Thanks, Bharath. (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2017 4:06:00 AM)

    The touching emotions of an orphan's mind. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (7/22/2017 2:36:00 AM)

    When my father and my mother forsake me, then the Lord will take me up (Psalms 27: 10) ... congrats on being chosen...Rated 10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (7/22/2017 2:22:00 AM)

    In simple style, but in heart touching lines you have expressed the agonies of an orphaned child.It is very painful for a child not to get parental love.As human beings we should show our love and concern if we find any such children in our vicinity. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (7/22/2017 2:16:00 AM)

    This poignant poem has the depth of feelings in that comes from the sadness of an orphan. A poem worthy for this category. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/22/2016 7:50:00 PM)

    Swimming in a sea of sadness! You have dealt with a difficult subject well. Congrats in winning poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (7/22/2016 12:38:00 PM)

    You have expressed well the agony of being an orphan. When family is lacking, friends are essential. We humans are social animals and need others. Congratulations on having this selected as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2016 11:24:00 AM)

    It's hard to imagine becoming an orphan so yoiung. A deeply moving piece, Bharat. Congrats
    on your poem of the day.
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  • Poetic Breath (7/22/2016 8:21:00 AM)

    Poet of the day, congratulation (Report) Reply

  • (7/22/2016 7:33:00 AM)

    Very touching story presented in a simple manner through this great poem. Heartiest Congrta for composing it as also on it's selected as member poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/22/2016 6:17:00 AM)

    This is so sad to have separation from mother and father. In reality or dream parents take in to play garden and teach valuable things. Getting mother and father's love in dream too makes life special. Really this poem is very thought provoking and heart touching....10 (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (7/22/2016 4:01:00 AM)

    In the dream,

    i have a sleep
    when a bed time story is finished.
    Suddenly when my eye's are opened
    i see my dream is vanished.

    Then i remember that,

    i lose my parent's
    i am an orphan now.
    In a dream i have
    mother and father's love.

    A very nice poem on the true pain of orphans and orphanage. Beautifully penned. Thanks for the poem.10 for it.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/22/2016 3:06:00 AM)

    Be courageous in life! No matter how hard it is. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/21/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    You tried well the agony of an orphan, it is painful to see them.. tender hands must splash the love with smiling face and lovely pearly glittering eyes we must love them..just remember- loving them is loving God.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 11, 2014

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