And Forg! Ve Me.... Poem by tanvi damle

And Forg! Ve Me....

Rating: 3.5


You forgive me for loving you too much,
and I'll forgive you for not loving me enough.
You forgive me for raising you so high,
and I'll forgive you for making me cry.
You forgive me for begging you to stay,
and I'll forgive you for walking away.
You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
and I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for thinking of you all night,
and I'll forgive you for not treating me right.
You forgive me for waiting by the phone to answer your call,
and I'll forgive you for not calling at all.
You forgive me for giving you my heart,
and I'll forgive you for breaking it apart.
You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
and I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
Forgiveness brings inner peace,
so do we have a deal?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Mountain 19 January 2010

Very nice, reads well. David M

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Allie Lusha 19 January 2010

Wow Tanvi... I'm with you right here on this one my current situation couldnt be better portrayed I love it You are certainly one of my favourite keep writing girl! ! ! ! you have a talent! !

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Luke Easter 19 January 2010

And Forgive You Not! You forgive me for loving you too much; I forgave you for not loving me enough. You forgive me for raising you so high; I forgave you for the many tears I cried. . You forgive me for begging you to stay, And I will thank you for walking away, You never appreciated love on my heart, That means it’s good thing we are apart. I forgive me for thinking of you all night, You selfish and for not treating me right, No waiting by my cell to answer your call, I hope you’ll never dial this number at all. Love tender as flowers refined as solid gold, But you ripped it apart destroying the mold, Forgiveness brought inner peace to my soul, Sadness locked in the past for I’m in control. A lesson earned through heartache? Rebound! This time a soul mate to share quiet or sound, Left for naught on the bottom I sprung to the top, Nothing but an advantage taker I forgive you not.

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Whispering Rose 22 January 2010

woww i love this one, although forgivness brings peace sometimes it's peaceful not to forgive everything and everyone

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g black black 22 January 2010

awww thas cute whoo

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Bernard Snyder 15 March 2011

Very nicely done Tanvi! I like the way you ended it! 'Do we have a deal'(lol)

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 13 March 2010

awesome. the poem ends with a bang. loved it. keep writing. wonderfully penned down. thank you very much.

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Braja K Sarkar 08 February 2010

Hi Tanvy, Thank you for sharing your poem.It is a nice poem indeed.I have enjoyed it

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2010

very touching piece.straight from the heart.brilliant writing.lol.

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Dr.ram Mehta 23 January 2010

Yes, it's a beautiful poem with good expressions

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