Yasmin Rubayo

And Here Comes Dark - Poem by Yasmin Rubayo

It's dark outside
But I see the light
Then darkness
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  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (12/18/2013 9:29:00 PM)

    very nicely written poem... dark and light play around the life...may be this is called life...
    write more....
    thanks for sharing..
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  • Patricia Grantham (11/23/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    A mind gripping poem detailing the light and the darkness.
    No matter how dark it is the light can cut through it. The same
    with our life we must continue to look toward the light that will
    see us through the difficult times. Thought provoking.
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  • (9/27/2008 10:45:00 AM)

    My band was wondering if we could have permission to use your poem as lyrics for a song.
    If we can please email me at christian.g23@hotmail.com
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  • (11/11/2005 12:04:00 AM)

    i like the lilt / the repetition / and the darkness / set thus circling (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2005 4:48:00 PM)

    because of your youth you are trying to explain the darkness in your relationships
    you want eternal light without fear, life is not like that you must except the pain with the happiness, as far as the poem it is good in it's depth and you show promise

    Warm regards AJS
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