Thursday, October 15, 2020

And The Last Leaf's Prayer... Comments

Rating: 5.0

And we have locked him outside
where is he still waiting
in the darkened corners of the night
no light no garlanding

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Varsha M
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 October 2020

hello rain come again you alone are exshollient poetess of PH All BOW WOW Ms rainy poetic honey

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 October 2020

Word of applause Therapeutic in cause The necessity because Positive strokes elevate The very sinking mood nurturance Propelling it to zone of confidence Transforming into joyous countenance To complete the task of utter importance Levied on our shoulders with expectency immense In hope to yield a gratified performance.......Hope this would be another foolish contribution from the lame duck simply pulling you to make you feel good as you too do......salaams mohtrammmmaaaaaaa

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2020

A perceptive write! Appreciated the understanding philosophy...an excellent composition. Top ??

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