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And Your Silence Speaks....

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Rain rain you had been my muse
Ever since I choose the cruise
Knew I, you like a gem pleasurable
Breathing life as it travel
Paving horizon unimaginable
Rain rain you had been my muse
Ever since I choose the cruise.
Over the vastness you expand
Like a massive mass on stand
Lashing all over, expressing your pain

That no eyes ever happen to witness
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And Your Silence Speaks....
Monday, August 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: care,love,understanding,voices
Inspired by Edward kofi Louis poem Muse of the rain I wrote these words
Muse the rain
You had been soothing gem
What troubled you here again
That you opened your tear gland

And I wanted to elaborate on it but then words wished to be in this form.
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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 September 2020

Lovely poem. I have some comments but have to bath and go to work I wish i could bath in rain Instead a shower my pain Wish i could comment on varsha madhulika I got rush out bath Hit the tedius path To work to graft Will a draft Later Write a letter To dear madhulika From me ma deluke aah!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 September 2020

A truly wonderful poem. Beautifully inked....10+++++++

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Varsha M 09 September 2020

Yes I always wish to enjoy every bliss of rain like a bird free in air. It's beautiful.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 09 September 2020

varsha, did you ever walk in the rain? it gives us poetic bliss.I walk hours and hours in rain.dont worry about fevers.it gives a motherly love

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2020

Chain and pain! Strain and stain! ! Muse of the rain to wash over; Able to train the mind with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 September 2020

Rain; rain you had been my muse Ever since I choose the cruise....it's like a song to hail the rain; pleasureful to read

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Deluke Muwanigwa 01 September 2020

Ever since i chose to take the cruise..... so that first line meter almost matches second

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