Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, August 23, 2009

Anniversary Comments

Rating: 4.8
It reminded me off years of marriage
Life passed easily on simple carriage
Happy days with joy and I could manage
Nothing went wrong with time and passage

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
COMMENTS
Rafique Farooqi 19 December 2009
I shall nobly as you desired Always you teased and work admired Who knew you will leave and get expired? Your work may lead me and thoughts aspired I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife we have to face this situation one day or the other, The departure of loved one is apprehending, and painful
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Subbaraman N V 04 November 2009
Yes; that indeed is God's inscrutable ways one has to accept! Pl. read my AFTER DEATH WHAT? in the PH.
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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009
All the poem is very beautifully written and very clear to understand
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Sachin Goswami 10 September 2009
was dumbfounded and could not cry Asked repeatedly for what crime and why? .....10
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Winnie Angel 06 September 2009
I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife Beautiful lines written from heart directly!
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Luwi Habte 05 September 2009
dear am back again how are you these times well this is also so very interesting and nice poem too well done dear luwi
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Rehana Nazli 05 September 2009
shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife Its good self-other reflective poem byou being a man I would say... thanks for sharing. 5/9/09
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Pandian Angelina 05 September 2009
Memories live beyond the grave. A very wonderful poem, Touching and heartfelt Hashmukji. Angel
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Surya . 05 September 2009
a poem sad and poigant. well composed.thanx for sharing a 10+++ fro me surya
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Sagarika Shah 03 September 2009
was dumbfounded and could not cry Asked repeatedly for what crime and why? ......10
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 September 2009
beautiful rhymes on a sad note...lovely sir....10
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Twinkle Vohra 03 September 2009
It reminded me years of marriage Life passed easily with simple carriage...reminds us of our long association.....10
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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 02 September 2009
The poem leaves an indelible imprint in the mind. The pang of separation of the the spouse is very difficult, specially if it is a sudden occurence As I have always expressed Hasmukh, your rhyming is very good.
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Joseph Poewhit 01 September 2009
Nice thoughts with sincerity
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Mystic Indian 01 September 2009
a brilliant and deep tribute in verse.10/10
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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009
I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife the ideas here inputed amazing! chosen words are fine! 10+
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Doha Ewiess 30 August 2009
this is so nice....i liked the last stanza...and sure the whole poem...meaningfull and creative...great work :)
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Ravi Sathasivam 30 August 2009
Very well written poem. Filled with excellent Ideas. Love to read it
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Marieta Maglas 29 August 2009
a great poem, very well expressed, nice rhymes, thank you for sharing.................10
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Edwina K 29 August 2009
Every year it will come and take me off I may not cry but can not hold bluff........10
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