Elise Johnson
Australia
Saturday, July 22, 2006

Another Chance Comments

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A chance to start over
a way to make new
To cast away the old beliefs and start fresh
The old life is over and the new one begins

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Elise Johnson
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Nalini Hebbar 20 August 2006
yes i do want to...always...new paths...the untrodden ones are the best...explore little girl but be prepared to gracefully accept the concequences...they teach great lessons...to err is human...and to rise from it needs a strong heart and mind...have fun with life...love...nalini
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Wang Jie 16 August 2006
It shows that you are somehow a revolutionary or radicalism teenagers, as what I am some years ago.
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Andrew Rose 02 August 2006
i like the poem, i think its better than the others and your very good at using imagery, it still seems a bit disjointed though, if u know what i mean.
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Kee Thampi 28 July 2006
old life is over and the new one begins Been here before and now again this could flourish or wilt and die Better take the chance jump into new life in this poem - I would like to shed my deep feeling on imagery you used here
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