Friday, November 11, 2005

Another Scar Comments

Rating: 5.0
I close my eyes tightly
And bite down on my shirt
Knowing it's about to hurt
I breathe slower


Ashley Olson
Ana x 25 January 2007
a great great poem loved it,10-10
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Kris F 16 November 2005
I really like it and enjoyed reading it: 'Oh well Just another scar' That really hit me as that is what they are scars and I think that way to. Its just another one on 'My Own body' they are my scars they repsent me. -Kris
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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005
Stark and powerful in its portrayal of youth.
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Mary Nagy 11 November 2005
It's very sad Ashley. So many young people are growing up with their bodies covered in scars from themselves. I wish there were an easy 'fix' to this growing problem. Take care. Sincerely, Mary
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