Apex Of The Malstrum Poem by Brittany Hafer

Apex Of The Malstrum

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secluded from your present
is all your future will ever be
living life as the prophet
but no audience shall seek for you
lost since the day you were born
with no north star to guide you by
franticly searching
as the meaningless ant
still no hope of a better past-time
east to west
north to south
pursued ever onward
by nothing for nothing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naé Tyler 03 September 2008

I like this, good job

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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 14 September 2008

if there was any eara of the past you could travle back in time to visit, I wonder wich would it be? , if you could pick one and write about it i would love to read.

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Alan Curtis 16 May 2009

Its hard 2 put my comment n2 words for this one Brit! Simply sweet! ! Peace, Hippy Sav

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James Mclain 16 April 2009

Ant's never get lost...unless they lose their dreams...nice poem..thanks..iip..I have a few ant poems..

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Darkness Everywhere 06 February 2009

thats really sweet. very well written well done keep writing

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James Roberts 05 December 2008

very very soleful somehow we all get lost in the storm from time to time jim

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 05 December 2008

ahhhhh what a sweet poem again nice one keep writing

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