Theodora (Theo) Onken

Washington State
Theodora (Theo) Onken
Washington State
Thursday, April 19, 2007

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Rating: 4.6
April flipped herself in
Like a brand new paragraph
For i'd left off in March
And winter 'twas still the subject matter

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Theodora (Theo) Onken
COMMENTS
Theodora Onken 04 September 2007
Thank you Dorothy and Bernie, Your words mean ever so much to me! Blessings, Theo
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 26 June 2007
Theo, You are so powerfull with words and thought! Love your poetry! Dorothy Now I must journey to more of your pages...
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Bernard Alain 02 May 2007
very nice again Theo, the opening on this was great, draws the reader in. -Bernie
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Michael Fischer 02 May 2007
Great work Theodora...'April flipped herself in like a brand new paragraph' was a great jump start and 'Take out the chill and hold on me still during a most troubling dark of night' was a memorable finish! In between, I liked the vivid descriptions and your craft! Top marks! -Michael
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Melvina Germain 27 April 2007
I love this poem Theodora, I like the flow of it, the rhyme is fabulous, it generates a peaceful feeling. It's just an all around great poem Theodora, thanks for writing this-Melvina-
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An irresistable title... you are one clever lady. t x
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