**** Arc Of Soul Mates *** Comments

The end to all is close, god help us all. Great read, I in joyed it alot. Thank you. Love, Kat sorrow

this poem is so amazing. you are very talented and a very original writer! keep it up!

I feel the descriptive of world's end. am I right, brother?

The extracts from Yehezqel's comments: From: Yehezqel Blah (India ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 11/20/2008 2: 36: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Good afternoon, Sulaiman! it's afternoon over here. 'Arc of Soul Mates' is a BIG poem. It dares to carry the weight of the eternal ramifications of LOVE - a subject so close to my heart because of it's profound ramifications and unimaginable abuse. 'Arc of Soul Mates' is a huge poetic tribute to love, though it appeared too weighty at first reading. It is a Victory song for love. Thank you very much.

well done with many clues and footprints of history and literature, somehow some of the meandering rings incompatable a bit affectatious though indeed the saga is worthy and interesting 10

mind is ur slave...an soul ur worshipper...........nothin more to say..

another witty display of deep excellence. thanks for sharing, melvin

awesome! like it very much! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's beyond the new century that is to come.

It can also be said of this piece that it describes love in its purest form. True love shared by two unselfish individuals who are great at forgiving, has the power to move mountains, change the course of mighty rivers, transcend time and space and cause one to go joyously insane with bliss... It is the greatest force on earth, even when the elements and manmade disasters endeavor to snuff us out... even when we can't see the sun... LOVE is the light that shines through the deepest darkness... Absolutely beautiful and thought provoking **10** Be Well

A piece that describes my hopless dream of finding love that is reaching the higher level of love - Agape..

Poem is very gentle and touching

wow....well done...........

Amazing poem.Universal. Thank you.

That was a really good poem. I really enjoyed it. One of your best. Keep writing more!

I took great delight in this poem, which has so many levels.

I think this is a brilliant poem of full 'epic' proportions. I loved it.

great poem, full of amazin expressions, i loved everyword of it.

Sulaiman, I'm sorry I've not been able to open my poemhunter page or I'd have written sooner. You are simply too powerful for words - but please don't explode out of blostering history of that segregation trade - well it left him (you) and her (yours) remnants of some acronyms in seduction. So. all was well and when the sun touched the earth, it all came crashing down. But please leave Kilmanjaro as it is - it's the big mountain we have in Africa and if it were ever to come crumbling, I guess that would be the end of the world. This is a wonderful poem, Sulaiman, but please kep my Kilmanjaro (it did not come out of that blostering trade) Mark

nice poem alot of big words haha