Mrs. Cynosure
Junction City Oregon
Tuesday, December 30, 2008

Are You Jealous? * Comments

Rating: 4.5
Waking up in the morning,
Getting ready for the day,
You wish you were me.
Listening to his soft voice,


Mrs. Cynosure
Ravi Kopra 18 July 2020
A hindi/urdu translation of st stanza so k subah uthee hoon kaam ko jaanay k liyay tyaar hoti hoon tumhari khawaaish hoti hai tum mere jaisay ho uski meethi awaaz suntay ho jo kehti hai tumain: meri baby main chaahta hoon tumain nafrat karta nahin kabhi tumain tum karti ho muje? haaN karti ho naaN yeh such hai. jhooth bolna naaN muj se kabhi.
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Connie Leigh Lindsay 22 June 2009
Ok you have got to tell me this story! I really want to know now.I love the poem.It made me start smiling because that is how I feel with my man.He is a big flirt but I know that it is just me in his life.
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Linda Weischedel 31 May 2009
Very well written, good job.
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Dr Yogesh Sharma 23 March 2009
this a is very natural feeling. excellent writeup.very well done.
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Keith Hendrickson 09 January 2009
i dont think i read this one yet but im glad i did. another great piece.
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Anjali Sinha 30 December 2008
hey dont u worry Becca--you r the best Saint is yours always a lovely siloloquy -10 anjali
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totally disturbed 30 December 2008
Nope, I thought I was then I came to my senses he's not worth it. Plus he wrote many love poems to me also... take care Wendy
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Sierra Love 30 December 2008
Haha this poem is lucky. & you sound like a very lucky woman to have such a nice man. = ] (one thing though...You said you have him 'raped' around your finger....might want to put 'wrapped'....other wise this poem was awesome)
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Stacey Watts 30 December 2008
Nope and absolutely not... Wow what a poem.. It is clear concise and brilliant as always.10
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Great and yes lol.. I like this poem very nice KRISTA
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