Artificial Things (Sextuple Senryu) Poem by Marieta Maglas

Artificial Things (Sextuple Senryu)

Rating: 4.8


Artificial breaths,
Like mimicking feelings of
Love with empty souls,

Artificial love,
Like sex mimics of drugged, raped
Girls, being in chains,

Artificial sex,
Like mimicking life in the
Dolls for making love,

Artificial life,
Like raping dead women to
Sate sadistic needs,

Artificial need,
Like rape mimics during sex
For excitation

And excitations,
Like artificial breaths for
Necrophiliacs.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to the poetess MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI, after reading her poem ''I WANT TO BE RAPED''

Note: Necrophilia
= obsession with and usually erotic interest in or stimulation by corpses (Merriam Webster) and also
=1. Obsessive fascination with death and corpses.
2. Erotic attraction to or sexual contact with corpses.(Farlex dictionary)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 31 May 2012

niv writes beyond a soul i love ur poem with a excite to truth

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Ramesh Rai 31 May 2012

i must like to say it is great write after Niv. and daring also. keep it up., Sex is for creation not for excitation or exploitation. The human has yet to learn so many things from nature and other creature of nature. Great and good job. Special Thanks to Niv. also who raised voice against such social crime.

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Iliena Bosu 01 June 2012

No matter how much we deny it, this is the ugly truth. Come to think of it, we are all happily living with this lie. This is an equally hard hitting poem yet very different in tone from Niv's I WANT TO BE RAPED. I enjoyed reading this poem. What I loved most about this poem is the openness and honesty with which this poem has been written. Thank you for sharing it with me.

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Amir Forougi 01 June 2012

I am a world before I am a man I was a creature before I could stand I will remember before I forget Before I forget that ...... Great piece with highly influenced philosophical doctrines of love hate human and so forth......

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Dave Walker 01 June 2012

A very very powerful poem, the truth is a hard thing to take. A really great poem.

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Liliana Roman 17 August 2012

that was awesome. i had to read it twice to get a full understanding.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 June 2012

An awful situation portrayed here. Clearly upsetting.

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 June 2012

Great poem. Agree with your thoughts madam. Well done. tfs

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James Merchant 09 June 2012

For some reason, the graphic portrayals you display in this poem work perfectly, in morbid harmony. Bravo!

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Kebe Iwara 08 June 2012

Nice. i appreciated it a lot. It is an interesting improvement on Nivedita's. U summed up a lot of things too and i agree with u.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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