Friday, November 30, 2007

As My Pen Bleeds Comments

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As my pen bleeds on this piece of paper
I sit and think of how the time stands still
It goes by so slow
Especially if your waiting on something or someone

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*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

Especially if your waiting on something or someone yes very true. I know 10 times more than they do this is also true from one girl to the next. but what can we say is 'we cant live with them but we cant live without them...lol. but really we just keep telling our selfs that its them that need us. lol. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Subbaraman N V 06 December 2007

No your pen does not bleed! It in facts pours your heart and soul out and I wish it pours honey and nector!

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brilliant poem and brilliant title..great stuff.. poetry is sports field with fair play and hooligans too in the stands...peace poet from india

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