As tears prick my eyes,
I hold down my cries.
Things that I fear,
Have atlas come so near.
A refined poetic imagination, Shamin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
Very good, pure and simple.10
Don't hold back the tears, crying helps you heal. Hope you soon fall for someone who makes you happy! Enjoyed your poem. Nessy x
Thank you Abdallah..your comment cracked a smile on my face.: D
wo0o0o0ow what a lovely poem, , but I think it isn't a poem it's a fabulous song, , in my opinion u've to give it to Rihanna and it will break the all records :) nice poem, , rated 10++
well written sweet cutie
Thank you Sir Afzal for such nice and encouraging comments. May Allah bless you.
Best Wishes for future
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