Paige Draheim

Rookie (01.29.1991 / Illinois)

As The Blood - Poem by Paige Draheim

As the blood runs down my legs,
I wonder, 'what is the point of it all.? '
As the blood trickles upon my wrists,
I wish I could just end all of the suffering.
As the blood pools into a crimson lake,
I realize I no longer have the strength to fight.
As the blood begins to stop all flowing,
I finally feel like I have all control.
I finally feel.

Comments about As The Blood by Paige Draheim

  • (5/8/2018 10:39:00 AM)

    Hey I write poems too but that poem was awesome and clever. I wish that I had thought of it. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/8/2011 11:33:00 PM)

    Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived.
    Liked it.
    I rated it 10/10.
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 9, 2011

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