Sunday, May 24, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! As The Ink Begins To Run...! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.2
A sheaf of papers got swept with the breeze,
Like kites my poems took flight with ease.
I watched as drifted and fell to the ground,
On the freshly mowed grass, without a sound.


Mamta Agarwal
Bob Blackwell 06 June 2009
Sometimes our thoughts rise, without blotting paper, they then fly back into the silence of our mind, to return again more clear. You write so beautifully Mamta, they must return refreshed. Bob
0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009
good allegorical write, Mamta...the paper there is your mind...soaring like kite and wetted with running ink...both give rise to nice poetic imgeries...thanks...10
0 0 Reply
Maitreyee Joshi 04 June 2009
how wonderfully you have expressed what we all poets feel but all the same when we express we feel so light.
0 0 Reply
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 June 2009
Dark clouds gathered and hid the setting Sun, Soon light showers soaked the papers, ink began to run, Like salty tears wet the cheeks of an overwhelmed heart. How come I feel free … I muttered to no one with a start. What a wonderful image of night, Mamta. The night has turned into the flow of creativity here. One can easily comprehend that how the overwhelmed heart of of a senstive being could transform the night into an ocean of ink (tears) . The voice and the colors of a true poetess are beautifully muted in this poem. Regards Naseer
0 0 Reply
C. P. Sharma 30 May 2009
Lovely poem with lilting sounds Sure your self search is profound CP
0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 28 May 2009
Your rhymes give music and meaning to the form. A very endearing portrait of a poetess, one who is beloved on poemhunter.10, for you. Always your friend, Sandra
0 0 Reply
Marilyn Lott 28 May 2009
Written by a true artist of words. Love your rhyming style as well. Wonderful - a '10! ' my friend. Warm Wishes, Marilyn
0 0 Reply
Vaibhav Pandey 28 May 2009
a beautiful poem indeed.....perfect rhythm and rhyme..I loved it ma'm....10
0 0 Reply
Raj Nandy 27 May 2009
When bottled-up thoughts find expression in rhyme, Both the mind and the heart lighten up with time! 10! -Raj Nandy
0 0 Reply
R.k Das 26 May 2009
a beautiful poem with charecters like the poetess, ink, penpaper, a chain of creativity, some lovely musings, some wonder some distraught, many parts of inner human intrigue us, we poor mortals, , what else, , we just 'mutter' in awe in wonder, , thanx
0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

3/5/2021 3:03:38 PM #