Monday, January 13, 2003

As You Leave Me Comments

Rating: 3.8
Shiny record albums scattered over
the living room floor, reflecting light
from the lamp, sharp reflections that hurt
my eyes as I watch you, squatting among the platters,


Marieta Maglas 26 March 2018
'quicksilver voice that dances among the stars'- wonderful poem.
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Susan Williams 26 March 2018
A heart-wrenching poem - I can think of only a few worse scenarios - - Knight is am impressive artist, capturing the moment where it will stand for an eternity.
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Kayode Are 26 March 2018
Fascinating cross between the descriptive and the ethereal- I die as I watch..
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Glen Kappy 26 March 2018
This is a vivid portrait made poignant and resonant with its ending. -GK
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 March 2018
The pain of separation has been painted touchingly. Beautiful poem shared.
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2018
Separation! ! With the muse of the pains of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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* Sunprincess * 13 January 2017
.....well penned...I wonder when the poet penned this ?
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M Asim Nehal 18 July 2016
The pain of separation is nicely penned.....10
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