Tuesday, January 20, 2015

Aspiration Comments

Rating: 4.8
In this still and perished night
On the stairway to the moon
Stars electric blue
Dazzling our view

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Mary Forrester
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 16 January 2019
'You and me forever On the stairway to the moon' - The poem ends on such a happy note! Well done, Mary Forrester, the poem resonates!
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 July 2017
A great poetic sublimation. You may like to read my ars poetica (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
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Kelly Kurt 29 March 2015
~~A very well written and evocative poem. Thank you for sharing.~~
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Kim Barney 17 February 2015
Very nice. Gives me a peaceful feeling. This is your newest poem, and it's almost a month old. Time to write a new one!
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Brave Hearts 01 February 2015
It rings in me a memorable honeymoon. Nice work, few but voluminous words!
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Clarence Prince 01 February 2015
You and me forever On the stairway to the moon. Love standing strong! Well done, Mary!
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Noreen Carden 28 January 2015
Beautifully written lovely description and a joy to read
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Hazel Durham 27 January 2015
What a beautiful gem you have written, perfect!
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Valerie Dohren 22 January 2015
Lovely Mary, very inspired.
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Lyn Paul 20 January 2015
...On the stairway to the moon...Amazing line Lovely words. Thank you
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