Sunday, December 18, 2011

At A Locksmith's Comments

Rating: 4.1
Excuse me Sir!
excuse me please,
I've heard about your too much fame
you claim to make amazing keys

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Shazia Batool
COMMENTS
Ramesh Rai 31 July 2013
The door of heart can be opened only by the keys of love, sympathy, compassion... Great Write. May have a delightful life. regards
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Chandana Khan 25 July 2013
one of my best for its compactness.10 marks
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Passionate Reader 30 June 2013
it's simply great! ! ! The idea is new and different. It's short but rich in meaning. Loved the theme. You have shared a great philosophy of life in simple words! ! ! IMPRESSIVE! ! !
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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013
excellent question Shahzia, The answer- -no I do not think so,
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R.j. Wynn 23 May 2013
Very thought provoking and intriguing.
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Yasmin Khan 16 April 2013
short, straightforward and at the same time offers wealth of meaning...I've read an adage somewhere: 'kind words unlock the iron door'...but some doors are really rusty. A lovely poem!
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Yaseen Anwer 11 March 2013
MashaAllah....Very good!
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Sun Shine 25 January 2013
kia baat hey, nehayat khubsoorat!
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Sun Shine 25 January 2013
OMG! from where you've got the idea! :) lovely!
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Captain Cur 01 June 2012
Very rich concise poem about our human condition. Just the right amount of words and imagery to get the point across.
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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012
Very clever. Skillfully written Shahzia. Love it.
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we may use a magnetic to draw them if not unlock!
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Allemagne Roßmann 26 April 2012
Beauty, passion, innovation, momentum-materials of a woman what lacks a rusted metal locksmith.The virtues are enough to smelt, melt iron hearts when determined otherwise wait coz iron to rusts with the time carbon.
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Adeline Foster 07 April 2012
What a lovely way to express disappointment with tact. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline
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Anant Bir Singh 08 March 2012
Simply and beautifully composed poem, Shazia! Keepyour ink flowing...
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Aman Sa 05 March 2012
absolutely amazing..ths is the clas of writing whch keep alive my desire to read more..well done..acept my applause
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Kp Shashidharan 26 February 2012
Who has misplaced or lost the key to unlock the iron chamber of heart? What if it is lost for ever, then a key maker can help without breaking the lock
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Wahab Abdul 25 February 2012
Very good use of logic and very good use of metaphor, an excellent poem, i like it 100%.
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Cg Shankar 18 February 2012
one can unlock the door- of iron hearts... The answer is very simp, e dear Shazihia. Love is the master key to open the doors ofiron heart! LOve the lover that love yourself.
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Cg Shankar 18 February 2012
one can unlock the door- of iron hearts... The answer is very simp, e dear Shazihia. Love is the master key to open the doors ofiron heart! LOve the lover that love yourself.
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