Shazia Batool
Pakistan
Sunday, December 18, 2011
At A Locksmith's Comments
Rating: ★4.1
Excuse me Sir!
excuse me please,
I've heard about your too much fame
you claim to make amazing keys
excuse me please,
I've heard about your too much fame
you claim to make amazing keys
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Shazia Batool
COMMENTS
Ramesh Rai
31 July 2013
The door of heart can be opened only by the keys of love, sympathy, compassion... Great Write. May have a delightful life.
regards
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Passionate Reader
30 June 2013
it's simply great! ! ! The idea is new and different. It's short but rich in meaning. Loved the theme. You have shared a great philosophy of life in simple words! ! ! IMPRESSIVE! ! !
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Heather Wilkins
26 June 2013
excellent question Shahzia, The answer- -no I do not think so,
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Yasmin Khan
16 April 2013
short, straightforward and at the same time offers wealth of meaning...I've read an adage somewhere:
'kind words unlock the iron door'...but some doors are really rusty. A lovely poem!
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Captain Cur
01 June 2012
Very rich concise poem about our human condition.
Just the right amount of words and imagery to get the point across.
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Allemagne Roßmann
26 April 2012
Beauty, passion, innovation, momentum-materials of a woman what lacks a rusted metal locksmith.The virtues are enough to smelt, melt iron hearts when determined otherwise wait coz iron to rusts with the time carbon.
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Adeline Foster
07 April 2012
What a lovely way to express disappointment with tact. Read mine - Cicatrix -
Adeline
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Anant Bir Singh
08 March 2012
Simply and beautifully composed poem, Shazia! Keepyour ink flowing...
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Aman Sa
05 March 2012
absolutely amazing..ths is the clas of writing whch keep alive my desire to read more..well done..acept my applause
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Kp Shashidharan
26 February 2012
Who has misplaced or lost the key to unlock the iron chamber of heart? What if it is lost for ever, then a key maker can help without breaking the lock
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Wahab Abdul
25 February 2012
Very good use of logic and very good use of metaphor, an excellent poem, i like it 100%.
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Cg Shankar
18 February 2012
one can unlock the door-
of iron hearts... The answer is very simp, e dear Shazihia. Love is the master key to open the doors ofiron heart! LOve the lover that love yourself.
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Cg Shankar
18 February 2012
one can unlock the door-
of iron hearts... The answer is very simp, e dear Shazihia. Love is the master key to open the doors ofiron heart! LOve the lover that love yourself.
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