Tuesday, March 30, 2010

At The Twilight Comments

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At the twilight, a moon appeared in the sky;
Then it landed on earth to look at me.

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Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi
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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2020
The moon came last night Lit my dark hime up delightfully The sun came yesterday Shined my path of life willingly You came last moment Filled my empty heart full with love Now all you are absent I find me in nothing Oh; what a loser I am Because I was busy these days with all And forgot to know the true myself
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Susan Williams 22 February 2016
At the twilight, a moon appeared in the sky; Then it landed on earth to look at me. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - sometimes loveliness comes in such simple words and phrases
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* Sunprincess * 22 February 2016
.....a lovely poem with extraordinary imagery ?
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M Asim Nehal 22 February 2016
Brilliant work, so nice to read...thanks for sharing.
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T Rajan Evol 19 February 2016
Wow a saintful writing.............100+
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smooth, gentle and flowing poem with profound meaning
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