Rose Marie Juan Austin

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Attraction - Poem by Rose Marie Juan Austin

Her dress floats elegantly
Under the bright lights
Of the dance floor

Legs sway seductively
To the rhythm
Of UnchainedMelody

His eyes were glued
To her face
Waiting to arrest her eyes
That are so lovely.


Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Topic(s) of this poem: attraction


Comments about Attraction by Rose Marie Juan Austin

  • (5/18/2019 9:10:00 AM)

    Lovely and tastefully sensual.
    Burnin' up the website, Rose!
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  • (4/24/2019 3:44:00 PM)

    A wonderfully created poem. Really loved it. (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (4/6/2019 1:55:00 AM)

    A small poem but very powerful as a romantic write! The natural attraction, a young man feels towards a beautiful girl in rhythmic motion is powerfully captured.On the dance floor, she is a marvel and so is your poem! A sure 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (12/3/2018 8:49:00 AM)

    Legs sway seductively
    To the rhythm
    Of UnchainedMelody. fine and real romantic poem.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/1/2018 3:48:00 AM)

    Legs sway seductively
    To the rhythm
    Of UnchainedMelody........nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem with romantic expression.
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  • Drtony Brahmin (10/27/2018 3:51:00 AM)

    unchained melody, seductive swaying..... beautiful poetic expressions.. thank u dear poetess. tony (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/16/2018 12:44:00 PM)

    His eyes were glued
    To her face
    Waiting to arrest her eyes
    That are so lovely.........this stanza justifies the title of the poem incisively. Beautiful poem.10
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  • Robert Murray Smith (5/15/2018 11:28:00 PM)

    Attraction is perfectly shown in this poem.+++10 (Report)Reply

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  • (3/19/2018 4:07:00 AM)

    One of the deepest poems that I had read like it (Report)Reply

    (3/19/2018 9:46:00 AM)

    Thank you so much, Aldouz for your amazing comment. I feel honored.

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/2/2018 12:53:00 PM)

    His eyes were glued to her face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

    Rose Marie Juan-austin(2/2/2018 4:06:00 PM)

    Thanks Edward for a lovely comment.

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (1/18/2018 10:40:00 PM)

    Her dress floats elegantly
    Under the bright lights
    Of the dance floor....Lovely expression. I liked it..Thanks for sharing!
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    Rose Marie Juan-austin(1/19/2018 8:33:00 AM)

    A wonderful comment, Dr.Dillip. Thank for your visit.

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/17/2018 8:58:00 PM)

    Beauty dancing in a poem on the music of love. (Report)Reply

    Rose Marie Juan-austin(1/18/2018 7:26:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful comment, Akhtar. Much appreciated.

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  • (1/17/2018 3:36:00 AM)

    Beautifully penned.. Loved every lines (Report)Reply

    (1/17/2018 5:17:00 AM)

    Thank you for the wonderful comment, .Rini.

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (1/17/2018 1:10:00 AM)

    Rose Marie, such a lovely poem...10+++ (Report)Reply

    Rose Marie Juan-austin(1/17/2018 5:16:00 AM)

    I am glad.you liked it, .Bernard.

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  • Nudershada Cabanes (1/16/2018 11:06:00 PM)

    An well crafted write Rose Marie. You have visualized a pair caught in the pool of attraction.

    Nudershada
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    Rose Marie Juan-austin(1/16/2018 11:13:00 PM)

    Thank you for your great comment, Nuder. Your visit is much appreciated.

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  • Muzahidul Reza (1/16/2018 10:40:00 PM)

    This poem has both attraction and pathos, wonderful, thanks for sharing the poem with us (Report)Reply

    Rose Marie Juan-austin(1/16/2018 11:10:00 PM)

    Such a wonderful comment, Muzahidul. Thank you for the visit.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 16, 2018

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 20, 2018


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