HASNAIN AAQIB

Rookie - 0 Points (8th July 1971 / Akola)

Autumn In Life - Poem by HASNAIN AAQIB

Autumn In Life

A man I see, with clothes tattered
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  • Yasmin Khan (8/20/2013 1:17:00 PM)

    It presents very vivid and realistic characterization, We can see such figures around us especially the addicts and paupers or anyone who is spending a remorseful life. There's a character Of Shakespeare, King Lear:
    But I am bound upon a wheel of fire, / That mine own tears do scald like molten lead. This is extreme agony that you have depicted well in your verse in symbol of autumn season.
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  • David Wood (7/30/2013 5:52:00 AM)

    A sad poem about a fact of life - the poor will always be with us - we have to be kind and give what e can. I invite you to read my poem Alone on the Streets which is similar. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/28/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    This is so beautiful. So much feeling. That last line - from zenith to nadir - sums it up perfectly. We are all deserving of at least the basic necessities of life. Those of us who are blessed with abundance have a duty to care for those less fortunate. I believe this is an unwritten decree. You express yourself beautifully, and your philosophy is also mine. (Report)Reply

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  • Hasnain Aaqib (7/26/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    I really feel that my fellow poets and critics should comment on my poems, in whatever taste their comments are, they will be welcome. hasnain aaqib (Report)Reply

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