Avoidence Is Void Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Avoidence Is Void

Rating: 3.6


I keep
Diving deeper
And deeper...
To avoid
Facing the
Problems on
The surface...
But the
Further I
Go, the
Faster they
Follow me...
I thought
It was
Done,
That it
Had been
The end...
But it
Seems I
Have only
Opened the
Door
And it's
Only the
Beginning

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gabhriel Londe 28 June 2012

Brings to mind- The furthur you tunnel away from your problems, the deeper they'll bury you. Good poem. Straight forward. Never shy away from your humility.

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Queeny Gona 21 June 2012

Wow, great job I would say! Optimistic thought out of a pesimist

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Joyce Rugg 20 June 2012

This is amazing! The title captures interest, the format is appropriate, and the poem is so true. Nice job! :)

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Connor Whyte 18 June 2012

Amazing. This is a lot like my poem The Edge is near. Feeling like your falling and lost without help is a hard thing to deal with but it will pass and you have to approach it and stop it.

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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

(Keep Avoidence to Violence The best way to get peace) A good poem! !

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