Styles Diesel

Rookie (9/22/93 / florida)

Bad Days - Poem by Styles Diesel

these days go by slow.i want them to go a lil sick of these days they are filled with this sadness and sorrow.I want these days to be fun and happy :) instead of sappy and one wants to be alone, cold, and trapped in this now lonely world never to be warm with a heart beat that is hear its comforting sound. a heart that is dwindling away into a dark place never to see its face.these are supposed to be happy days with warm smiles and family around you.Is this a happy time with the world this way? help one of those smileing faces so u can feel warm in these places

Comments about Bad Days by Styles Diesel

  • (2/13/2010 7:50:00 PM)

    i really like the set up (Report) Reply

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  • Adam Reed (2/12/2010 6:56:00 PM)

    i agree. one thing tho lol it would have been so badass if u rhymed faster with disaster lolz (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 10:47:00 AM)

    Nicely written, it was really enjoyable (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed (2/2/2010 10:07:00 AM)

    i actually like the no space thing. it gives it a more desperate, frantic feel to it. good job i liked it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2010

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