Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie - 26 Points (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

Balance - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

(dedicated to Ellie Sutton)

Just enjoy some time to yourself
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Comments about Balance by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • (11/24/2008 8:06:00 AM)

    Again, you master putting such a powerful message into a smaller piece but every word was perfect. Very nice. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/23/2008 12:27:00 AM)

    Great job.. Very nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • (11/22/2008 6:25:00 AM)

    Levels to levels are good in balance-nice poem (Report)Reply

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  • (11/21/2008 10:27:00 AM)

    All things should be in balance in order to have a perfect harmony with the world and humanity...NIce write Ahmad. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/20/2008 10:00:00 AM)

    Ahmad, timely welcome words. As a woman (not all women, mind you) , I now know that I spent most of my life tending to the needs of others, including animals. Of late, I've been yearning to do just what you suggest. For me, it includes spending time engaging with strangers when I'm out and about. Lots of laughter, relaxation and lots of learning are the results. Good medicine. Love to examine things in nature, ponder the what, why, where and how of life, too. Definitely requires leisure time and a relaxed state of being. I do think that you, based on your incredible observations of all that is, have mastered the art. Thank you! Carol (Report)Reply

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  • (11/20/2008 5:27:00 AM)

    Water will rise to its level in the sea (Report)Reply

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  • (11/19/2008 12:12:00 AM)

    wonderful advice
    which will make us more wise
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  • (11/16/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    wow. This is a lovely theme, I love the last stanza especially. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/15/2008 8:49:00 PM)

    enjoy some time to your self..... lovely composition. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram Ramachandran (11/15/2008 7:17:00 PM)

    Time and tide waits for no man. Procrastination is the thief of time. Take the time by its forelock. Time has no beginning or end. One more definition of 'Time' from Ahmad Shiddiqi. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/15/2008 11:25:00 AM)

    great thoughts well penned (Report)Reply

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  • (11/15/2008 10:37:00 AM)

    very true...but what heart follows, , , mind for sure enjoys, , , nothing cn b forced (Report)Reply

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