Yasmin Khan

Ballerina

As she whirls and twirls it's not her flesh
It's her soul that bathes in ecstasy
It's her heart that feels the bliss
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  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/14/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    sweet words, beautiful imagery
    i agree, Ballerina write a poem with her limbs
    enjoyed to read it

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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (7/21/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    a beautiful sight to watch the ballerina dance.

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  • Passionate ReaderPassionate Reader (7/3/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    The body and the soul, spin and spin
    And ballerina write a poem with her limbs.

    Lovely lines! ! ! i enjoyed reading it :)

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (2/2/2013 7:43:00 AM)

    Wow Jasmeen, this is wonderful. These dancing ballerina can realy get into such an all absorbing flow and you brought it into words in a fantastic poem. A joy to read the poem, a joy to see the ballerina in our mental eyes and to feel the dance.

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  • Anela Mrubata (1/27/2013 12:34:00 AM)

    Well written.. ''And ballerina write a poem with her limbs.''... The poem is flawless in creating an image as to what you're saying, throughout the whole poem. Well done! I invite you to read my poems as well

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (1/22/2013 4:23:00 AM)

    A stunning performance of grace, elegance intricately woven with nature's pure beauty! !
    Excellent write!

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (1/21/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    what a fab word pic.....
    loved it
    its so vividly descriptive almost surreal
    it brought to mind a n old Favorite number..... “Feeder - Save Us.”

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