insanity is endemic in the race of man my friend
Kill those who are different or believe differently but never
examine your own beliefs.
The purpose of terrorism is to bring terror and all too easily achieved Any fool can finda cause but few can think
This is a very disturbing description indeed, as is often the case with truth. It is sometimes hard to believe the brutality that the human race is willing to inflict upon itself. Even though, somewhat depressing, this is an excellent work. Thanks for the invitation. Best wishes
Such desperation and destruction. If there is a God, how does this continue to happen? Makes you wonder if Evil is winning this war. We can only continue to pray for peace and not let this evildoing take us under. A powerful piece, written from the heart and soul of one who truly understands the implications of war and its consequences. My heart reaches out to you and your country, and every country affected by the devastation brought about by evilminded warmongers with no respect for the lives of others.
We have turned quite blunt to the horrendous acts being committed by merchants of death who dont have any religion but to kill. The poem nicely presents the pains and the heart rending experiences of the afected in Jaipur. It is but touching and makes you sink more into the state of gloom where we all are and pray for God for the wit to the mindless.
Yet they do live here...they live among us, and wait until the right moment when they can prey upon innocent lambs. You have portrayed pure evil...raw...brutal...and hated. no matter what humanity exists...there shall always remain...evil as a balance.
Your poem perfectly regects all the evils inflicted on mankind by mankind itself but there also is kindness and compassion between people while we should never forget the injustices done we should concentrate on the acts of goodness and unselfishness that we sometimes show eqach other
The title of this poem invites the reader to prepare for a not so pleasant journey.
And you did not disappoint. One barbaric is on an unconscious mission to destroy and destruct. This is a condtioning process. Believing to inflict another sorrow is not observed by the Earth which lives and breathes...feels and reflects. OR returns what it gets. Interesting poem. A bit 'gloomy', however, that is its purpose. And that has been achieved.
This reader feels the intensity of your desperation penned with understandable and heartfelt passion and yet cannot but remember Gibran's words from the Prophet: 'Oftentimes have I heard you speak of one who commits a wrong as though he were not one of you, but a stranger unto you and an intruder upon your world. But I say that even as the holy and the righteous cannot rise beyond the highest which is in each one of you, So the wicked and the weak cannot fall lower than the lowest which is in you also.' Sometimes it is necessary to let go of the struggle to understand the very worst and focus instead on celebrating the very best of homo sapiens. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Passion, angst, and lament, bleed from the womb of this sadly beautiful work....Your versing, here, so accurately reflects the anathema & shock of this
Anti-Christ war on peace, that these barbarians continue to inflict on innocent hearts, and with spineless, abhorrent cowar.Excellent Work, Doctor, indeed!
Good question: should we still call humans 'homo sapiens'? perhaps not.In the beginning, man was pure, he has been created ressembling his Divine Creator...but by sin, which came into man's life by his own choice, that purity has vanished...As for the terrorists, no wonder they do so much bad thinking wrongly that they do good, since they do not believe in the one and only true God.They aren't aware of the fact that suicide is a deadly sin and all who make that will burn in the pit of hell, forever. It is a mad world, and you've accurately described it.We must never lose our hope! let each of us do his best, and the world will surely become a better place.Keep on the good work.