Bare Assed Comments

You seem to be full of fun.

'I come to you now unclothed, unwashed and unabashed, This is my barest, lowliest, truest self' i love this lines..

your poems and wordings take the reader with you inside these lines.

A very original poem showing crudity of life....... A definite 10.

Raw and right out there. Well penned. Jim

One thing I enjoy about reading your poems, Eddie, is that there is no beating around the bush, you get right down to the point in all of your fine poems! This intriguing write is no exception. It is very descriptive of the underside of life, far from the spotless penthouses of the wealthy who essentially engage in the same practices as we more average folks do though they pay more for such services. I loved the phrasing in most of your lines, especially your final five lines in this terrific poem. Carl.

this made me laugh, cuz I was thinking, is this the answer to my poem 'Naked into Night.' (another great one from you)

A very exposed Lovely write 10 ++++

Open, barefaced realism. Another great work Eddie. Mark

With every poem I read of yours I become more and more of your fan. Beautifully flowing poem. I can say a true poem.....

I love the way this was presented. The structure is a complement to the words of this piece. The words flow together very, very well indeed. The focus is purely singular. I find no limitations here at all. I wish all such written pleadings had such coherence and quality. I like it very much. GW62