Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Beach (A Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0
Pebbles on the beach
Pierce through our heels as we walk
A mild price to pay
For the damage we subject

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asma bahrainwala
COMMENTS
niggaboy 14 January 2018
this poem is gay and very bad you people have no sense of taste
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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008
A short and cute composition.10 with love.
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Melvina Germain 25 August 2007
A small poem with a huge meaning, we must clean up our act and protect our environment. Well said Asma, I love when poets show concern about our precious environment, Thankyou Asma.--Melvina--
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Peter A. Crowther 16 December 2006
Neatly encapsulates the truth that we will have to pay for the damage we inflict on our beautiful planet
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Onida 22 November 2006
A very right and real fact, all captured so beautifully! ! yours, Nida
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Shivapriya Surve 19 November 2006
Wow! That's so original and earnest! What a thought Asma!
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Preeti - is here! 18 October 2006
This is like a flash realisation. Really liked it Asma. Preets
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