Friday, November 30, 2012

Beautiful Creatures Comments

Rating: 4.3
The soil which we plant our seeds
beautifully dangerous, remarkable creatures
strangely complicated, a delicate rare breed
shelters, nurturers, the definition of strength and warmth


Kelvin Owusu
Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2015
Nice work with the muse of creation! Thanks for sharing.
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 September 2014
What deserving tribute to the woman creature! You have expressed all that in a manner we could not imagine even. Lovely in all respects.
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Owain Glyn 17 December 2012
You have captured the essence of women well in this piece, Thank the Lord you didn't get into the downsides!
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Lyn Paul 13 December 2012
This is beautiful Kelvin. Acknowleding us as Beautiful Creatures is lovely and makes us feel valuable.. Glad you didn't mention first thing in the morning. Well done.
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Elena Sandu 03 December 2012
Beautifully written! Delightful poem, Thank you!
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Vijay Sai R 03 December 2012
a great tribute to every women...especially mother
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Valerie Dohren 02 December 2012
It's heartwarming to know that there are men out there who genuinely have respect for women - both men and women should be shown respect, but throughout history women have so often been considered to be inferior or second class citizens. Thank young kelvin - good one.
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 02 December 2012
I go for this, Kelvin. Thank you so much for writing with women as the main character. Yes, I hope there will be more poems to uplift the place of women on earth and among creation.
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Stevie Taite 02 December 2012
Well sir, that paints us in a kind light! It was charming to read and thank you, as one of these creatures for this Poem. We can be a bit crazy and annoyingly emotional but generally, we rock! Lol. (liked TR's comment too!)
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 December 2012
So great and nice because we are all born from one essence. we have no different in our humanity but we will be changed in our actions. so fragrant and nice.
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Nader Baheri 01 December 2012
wow..what a brilliant idea and topic to write. women......the most beautiful delicate complicated creatures.god must be so genius that created women. i wonder if the god himself is a woman.just like that ancient greek god i mean- Isis-. or the world and the universe is female. i have always thought why or how could some people like Friedrich Nietzsche(one of my great witers) write those things about women? ? ? ! ! ! the only answer i could find is that he began the feminism. i think women deserve even more than this.even more than isis. not only the women but also the men praise this great art. i enjoyed alot. god bless you~nb
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John Brown 01 December 2012
You've just about summed them up well there Kelvin. Nice poem
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