Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 291 Points (9 may / India)

Beautiful Girl - Poem by Rigzin Namgyal

beautiful girl, beautiful girl
you are so powerful
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
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Comments about Beautiful Girl by Rigzin Namgyal

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/4/2016 2:14:00 AM)

    Very simple poem.... (Report) Reply

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  • (2/3/2016 5:40:00 PM)

    Simple write, though it depicts the joy of love and the heartbreak. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/13/2015 2:39:00 AM)

    how i bring myself out of your spell ? ? By repeating the beautiful girl, you are emphasizing something which you understand and want to express in a dear way. thank you. very good poem. liked your simplicity in words and expressions. tony (Report) Reply

  • (6/23/2015 12:26:00 AM)

    Beauty can be deceptive...I love the construction of the poem and style of writing... But I just don't understand how and or why someone's beauty can ruin another... The ruin may not be her fault, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2015 7:38:00 AM)

    never try
    for sky
    but remain on earth
    wih smell, fragrance and faith
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  • Chinedu Dike (12/29/2014 9:26:00 AM)

    Vain glorification of beauty comes with distress or tragedy in the bliss of love. A nice poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • (10/24/2013 7:10:00 AM)

    Lovestruck you are...supposed! (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (2/11/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    Ruined by love, we can all relate to that. Good poem. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (1/26/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    what do you mean actually (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan (11/20/2012 8:18:00 AM)

    wee but cute poem..kp writing... (Report) Reply

  • Scarlett Outlaw (11/19/2012 4:16:00 AM)

    I loved it! ! It sounds like you really like a girl - tell her if you do! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/18/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Powerful poem with a sad ending, this is a plea from the heart, how beauty can destroy so easily! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (11/18/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    Ah! So simple but you did express what you want tell more..it will be more sweeter if you add some detail, , , But Rigzin this is a good work! keep writing and try smething new in every write, and challenge yourself to do better each time for new write..you can do it! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Aung Si (11/18/2012 3:32:00 AM)

    Good! By using the word beautiful girl again and again, your poem is so strong what u'd like to highlight.Thanks for inviting me.I give u vote 8. (Report) Reply

  • Shiela Marie Anunciacion (11/17/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    I must agree with Saadat Tahir, it's almost like a nursery rhyme... well versed and well written, easily memorized and easily imagine... a beautiful girl who captured the poet's heart and now he is ruin for other girls.. simple and innocent but with hidden power. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (10/12/2012 4:42:00 AM)

    Hmm. So cute the poem is! Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2012 6:43:00 AM)

    really cute i must say....................keep on writting (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2012 6:42:00 AM)

    really cute i must...................keep on writting (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (5/18/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    thanx for the invite.... :)

    its like a Aesop fable....almost rhymed to nursery style
    well written

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  • Neetha Sasidharan (5/18/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    cool poem....kp writing, , , , , (Report) Reply

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