You said you shall stay
The next moment you are gone
You tell me not to fray
And I wait till every dawn
And smile as my pain slowly drains
Rachel Ann Butler
This 'beautifully hurt' is beautifully written..
reading your poem down and enjoying, happy when it ended in a smile. very good
I like this poem, it reminds me my teenage. Very hard reaction and successful slow down.
This is so strong a poem. I hope you don't really hit your head. Get pillows and get the pain and anger out this way. Excellent work! Karin Anderson
strong words for a strong poem. powerful and beautiful...10!
lines penned with mixed emotions...........a complete combination of love, care mixed with depart n tears...........10+++ sebastine
ahh Sania much poignant write.....such a painful lines, made me freezed for a sec.........te way yu ended the last line s awesome....lines with feelings straight from the heart.....10+++ sebastine
smiling out the pain...yes...that is the best way to heal a wound...especially a love wound...words beautifully expressive, Sania...nice write...10
Good strong write Sania...well done...thank you
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