Beauty Poem by NISHIT KALAVADIA

Beauty

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful eyes, beautiful face,
I'm shy to talk to you.
You're the eagle I must watch
No matter what I do.
You're the beauty, wild and free,
The mistress of my eyes,
Rolling through exultant air,
Alone in pristine skies.

I would take you for my own
Could I but have your wings,
Could I but go where night begins
And frozen sunlight sings.

Could I but have you for my love,
How might we fly together!
But I must watch you from below
And long for you forever.
But I must be the one below
And long for you forever.

: NISHIT

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2009

Could I but have you for my love, How might we fly together! But I must watch you from below And long for you forever. But I must be the one below And long for you forever. u must offer undonditional and pure love and it will be possible for you to have her with you.. it's beauty is to see and enjoy it... lovley poem....10 read mine beauty.....miss i miss u...mary to marry

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

well written poem, nice portrait, thank you for sharing........10

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Patti Masterman 07 November 2009

I know you are tired of your age being made to sound as if you are so so young- but you are so young and yet you are writing like an old trooper; it's astounding in every way. Like Patrick said; whatever you do, don't stop writing, and if somebody tries to shoot you down, just remember: they must be jealous..(smile)

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Moushumi moushumi 28 September 2009

An honest love indeed

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wonderful poem..............

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Hazem Al Jaber 28 September 2009

well penned and beautiful follow.. thanks for sharing.. hazem al..

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Kesav Easwaran 28 September 2009

rhyming comes naturally to you...a good adoring piece on/for your love...thanks...10

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