Aiden Florence

Rookie (Los Angels)

Beauty In Sinking Ships - Poem by Aiden Florence

Sometimes, bitterness inundates your heart
Until illumination is sapped left to right
Finally you’re realizing what has just happened
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Comments about Beauty In Sinking Ships by Aiden Florence

  • Hunter Hunters (11/19/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    I was searching for a poem on sinking ship and i found your, and its excellent. I also have a work on sinking ship you can enjoy it. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/2/2008 2:32:00 PM)

    It's obvious that you've worked on this. I admire how you pull the poem together through repetition and that you've made an emotion without end fit into the boundaries of four lines to a stanza. What is said can be focused on better because of these characteristics, and that is deathly important, because what you have to say is serious and should be heard. Excellent work. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2007 5:30:00 PM)

    Wow...really all I can say is wow. That give's such vivid images. Darkness and sorrow. Yet the will and striving to survive, to struggle on through life and to love. Lovely piece, you're quite the artist. I commend you on a job well done! (Report)Reply

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