Friday, August 9, 2013

Beauty Of This Corpse Comments

Rating: 5.0
Visiting the Funeral Home
Today on my way home
I really felt the need to open these doors
To feel the peace, the serenity

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Lyn Paul
COMMENTS
Amitava Sur 29 June 2014
During reading this emotional poem I could see the kind hearted and caring Lyn. Thank you Lyn.
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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2013
You have described a difficult subject so well at ease! The title is captivating, the text poignant yet calming and soothing just for your words. Your kindness must have been felt by the bereaved family as much as, if not more than, we did. A great poem.10/10.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 22 August 2013
Stillness, serenity, tranquility and peace are integrated into body without life making it all the more beautiful. You captured all this in your poem. Thank you.
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Hazel Durham 20 August 2013
I too find peace in a cemetery with people at rest in God's holy embrace. The beauty of this corpse is such a beautiful write!
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Dipy Hermonite 19 August 2013
Shows how caring and sensitive you are Lyn. I love your pure thoughts.
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Valerie Dohren 13 August 2013
Very moving and poignant Lyn. Nice write.
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Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013
when I visit the cemetery I fee close to my love ones. as if they remain there even thought I know their spirit has long been gone. But it is their resting place. helping others is a great feat. nice write
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Dee Corpolongo 12 August 2013
I think that you have a wonderful and caring nature to be able to feel the comfort given in death to others who hurt. Love your expressive words. and calming feeling.
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 August 2013
a helping hand is a soothing hand. sensitivle.
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Mark Dillon 11 August 2013
Nice poem Lyn and so reflective of your kind spirit.
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Kevin Halls 10 August 2013
I too like Cemetery's and when I go to visit the place where my parents are laid I feel peaceful and calm. Some people get spooked by them for some strange reason, when they shouldn't be. Smashing poem Lyn.
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Diane Hine 09 August 2013
You write about difficult subjects so sensitively, a real gift.
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